Re: May 31 Draft

Daniel W. Connolly (connolly@beach.w3.org)
Fri, 2 Jun 95 00:07:58 EDT

In message <199506020040.BAA28619@curia.ucc.ie>, Peter Flynn writes:

[anything not mentioned here was edited as requested]

>p.2, para 3. "several variations"? Just two, surely?

Nope. You forget HTML.Deprecated, plus levels...

>p.3, top. [SGML] should have the brackets removed.
>
>p.4, top. ditto, passim (eg p.6, bottom) There are rather a lot
> of these.
>p.32, 6.3 Queries [URL] remove brackets
>

Those are bibilography citations.

Dan